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    December 11

    曾经写的一首歌

    答应skald 给大家看我写的诗歌.有人说以前写的太难懂了.暑假里就试着写歌词.下面就是一首.（现在学了诗学，觉得自己写的好烂哭泣）
     
    标  题: 在我心中裂开的每一丝缝隙

    啦 啦 啦 啦

    去年春天我在你心里种下一根头发
    她在头上插满了花
    我没有说话

    今年你就长出了一颗晴雨娃娃
    她就拔光了羽毛呀
    我捡起了花

    默默无言地静了一会
    就像是水里的双鱼
    注视着天空的眼睛

    她那消逝的梦呀
    她那砍下的双手

    撒下遍地奇异的花朵
    瀑布后的洁白少女
    唱起灵动的歌声

    我那圆缺的梦呀
    我那碎裂的缝隙

    在我眼中裂开的每一丝缝隙
    在你掸去的每一星灰
    在我嘴角裂开的每一丝缝隙
    在你眉上的每一座山

    啦 啦 啦 啦

    在我心中裂开的每一丝缝隙
    在你背后落下的每一块刀片

    飞的是谁的断发
    生的是无言的芽

    啦 啦 啦 啦

    。。。
    ——22:14 29/07/2007
     
     
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    Rainy Liuwrote:
    tianwei啊，你能不能不要从技术角度分析这首歌。。。
    Dec. 17
    Jia Chenwrote:
    后来变了个韵...
    最后补回来了
     
    ls不要那么形式主义嘛5555
    Dec. 11
    Tianwei JIANGwrote:
    前面韵挺好的
     
      到中间忽然就没了
     没韵的唱起来会超郁闷的啊
     
    Dec. 11

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